Moriah Leila

I'm guessing, you yourself are a linguist? Perhaps you aspire to be one? Some of the language used confused me, as it has been so long since I was in ...

Wow, talk about morbid. It was quite an impactful poem to read. While not exactly my cup of tea, it still held my interest, and it was written quite beautifully. ...

Hey! Ha ha, my first review of your poetry, this should be fun. I really enjoyed the first poem, as I could almost visualize the red exterior of the locker ...

I thought this was a very creative way to express your admiration for this politician and would certainly be useful for his campaign! I did not like the fact that ...

I thought this poem was simple and beautiful. You didn't use too many metaphors to jumble it up and I appreciate that. I agree, child's laughter can be one of ...

I thought this poem was so very true, in that, it is difficult for us to understand each other as human beings, when our pasts and experiences are so varied. ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this poem. While I am not a fan of boxing myself, you painted a riveting portrait of this boxer. My only real critique is how you ...

It is so refreshing to read a poem where the girl is not envious of her friend's beauty. You mention it briefly, but it is evident to me that your ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed your poem, because you did a good job of finding ryhmes that fit the theme. I am terrible at this sort of thing. So bravo! ...

I love it! It not only makes me want to practice my pyschotic laughter, but it also makes me want to hit a pinata full of sugary goodness. My only ...

Okay, well I said I would find something to critique, so I must keep my word. However, I am being seriously nitpicky here. First of all the scene with the ...

Ash pretty much summed it up. Your writing is beautiful, your descriptions vivid. But the problem is that you overwhelm us with purple prose. What is purple prose? Wikipeida defines ...

Hey Rosey, I happened upon this story and thought I might add my two cents. While I think your descriptions are wonderful and I can imagine myself alongside the characters, ...

It seems that Meadow covered all of the nitpicks that I saw, so I won't bore you with that. My only real critique would be to point out your characters. ...

Honestly, I hate poetry. But I really like your poem. It was simple and to the point. I didn't have to figure out what you were talking about, which is ...